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What you want to give me is a window
Through which to view the world beyond my own
where the morning sun shines in to warm me
With light to show the way to love and truth
Opening to welcome warm spring breezes
and laughing neighbor children as they play
to shut against the cold of winter nights
safe shelter me away from falling rain
oh what a gift of life and joy and warmth
this seems to be, when looked at from inside
But I am just a sparrow flying free
you give me just reflections of the sky
I in love and trust receive them gladly
enter your deceptions, die against glass
Through which to view the world beyond my own
where the morning sun shines in to warm me
With light to show the way to love and truth
Opening to welcome warm spring breezes
and laughing neighbor children as they play
to shut against the cold of winter nights
safe shelter me away from falling rain
oh what a gift of life and joy and warmth
this seems to be, when looked at from inside
But I am just a sparrow flying free
you give me just reflections of the sky
I in love and trust receive them gladly
enter your deceptions, die against glass
ok...this one is a bit cliche in spots, and still too bloodless, but at least the extended metaphor is more obvious,
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This reminds me of Robert Bly; once again, beautiful.